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		<title>By: Annie</title>
		<link>http://www.dianapeterfreund.com/worldbuilding-post-one/comment-page-1/#comment-5571</link>
		<dc:creator>Annie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Sep 2006 20:02:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Um, but Qui-Gon didn&#039;t die on Tatooine....</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Um, but Qui-Gon didn&#8217;t die on Tatooine&#8230;.</p>
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		<title>By: Diana Peterfreund</title>
		<link>http://www.dianapeterfreund.com/worldbuilding-post-one/comment-page-1/#comment-5567</link>
		<dc:creator>Diana Peterfreund</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Sep 2006 17:25:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ah yes, renee... the fans remember ALL.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah yes, renee&#8230; the fans remember ALL.</p>
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		<title>By: Diana Peterfreund</title>
		<link>http://www.dianapeterfreund.com/worldbuilding-post-one/comment-page-1/#comment-5566</link>
		<dc:creator>Diana Peterfreund</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Sep 2006 17:23:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Paula, that&#039;s a really great point that worldbuilding is really just another way to hammer home the necessity of CONSISTENCY -- in any kind of plot, paranormal or otherwise. &lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;Annie, much as I hate to reference the prequels for the explanation of ANYTHING -- at the end of the third movie, Yoda and Obi-Wan have a conversation about how they are going to spend their time in exile, and Yoda suggest they study the method that &quot;Qui-Gon&quot; used to achieve immortality. There is further speculation  that Qui-Gon, having perished on Tatooine, was able, in his ghostly form, to tutor Obi-Wan in this method while Obi-Wan was in exile on Tatooine. This is apparently how to achieve immortality:&lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;&quot;This was apparently achieved through extreme compassion and a rejection of selfishness and personal attachment to the point that the physical self fades away but the consciousness remains as one with the Force.&quot;&lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;Liam Neeson was apparently scheduled to appear as a ghost in the other two prequels, but apparently the scheduling didn&#039;t work out.&lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;So the question is, why did Yoda and Obi-Wan disappear and not Qui-Gon or Anakin? Dunno. This is apprently a huge point of speculation among the big star wars fans.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Paula, that&#8217;s a really great point that worldbuilding is really just another way to hammer home the necessity of CONSISTENCY &#8212; in any kind of plot, paranormal or otherwise. </p>
<p>Annie, much as I hate to reference the prequels for the explanation of ANYTHING &#8212; at the end of the third movie, Yoda and Obi-Wan have a conversation about how they are going to spend their time in exile, and Yoda suggest they study the method that &#8220;Qui-Gon&#8221; used to achieve immortality. There is further speculation  that Qui-Gon, having perished on Tatooine, was able, in his ghostly form, to tutor Obi-Wan in this method while Obi-Wan was in exile on Tatooine. This is apparently how to achieve immortality:</p>
<p>&#8220;This was apparently achieved through extreme compassion and a rejection of selfishness and personal attachment to the point that the physical self fades away but the consciousness remains as one with the Force.&#8221;</p>
<p>Liam Neeson was apparently scheduled to appear as a ghost in the other two prequels, but apparently the scheduling didn&#8217;t work out.</p>
<p>So the question is, why did Yoda and Obi-Wan disappear and not Qui-Gon or Anakin? Dunno. This is apprently a huge point of speculation among the big star wars fans.</p>
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		<title>By: Renee</title>
		<link>http://www.dianapeterfreund.com/worldbuilding-post-one/comment-page-1/#comment-5564</link>
		<dc:creator>Renee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Sep 2006 16:39:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>May I suggest:&lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;Rule #4: Write down your rules and re-read them often!  Otherwise, what&#039;s the point? Everything seemed crystal clear when you originally plotted but now you&#039;re in the last third of the book and your plot line is starting to look more like a celtic knot; it&#039;s quite possible some of your changes have affected your rules! Or now you&#039;re on book 2 or 5 or 15 and who in their right mind could simply remember who can do what using what magic words under what phase of the moon, etc. after all those books? The readers, that&#039;s who! Hopefully, they love your work enough to have been re-reading all this time, even if you haven&#039;t been. Worldbuilding Rules need to be written down and reviewed periodically during the writing process.&lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;Not that I feel strongly about it or anything... LOL</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>May I suggest:</p>
<p>Rule #4: Write down your rules and re-read them often!  Otherwise, what&#8217;s the point? Everything seemed crystal clear when you originally plotted but now you&#8217;re in the last third of the book and your plot line is starting to look more like a celtic knot; it&#8217;s quite possible some of your changes have affected your rules! Or now you&#8217;re on book 2 or 5 or 15 and who in their right mind could simply remember who can do what using what magic words under what phase of the moon, etc. after all those books? The readers, that&#8217;s who! Hopefully, they love your work enough to have been re-reading all this time, even if you haven&#8217;t been. Worldbuilding Rules need to be written down and reviewed periodically during the writing process.</p>
<p>Not that I feel strongly about it or anything&#8230; LOL</p>
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		<title>By: Annie</title>
		<link>http://www.dianapeterfreund.com/worldbuilding-post-one/comment-page-1/#comment-5553</link>
		<dc:creator>Annie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Sep 2006 14:17:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Started thinking last night more about this entry and Star Wars and one thing that has really bugged me is this: the seeming inconsistent rule for what happens when a Jedi dies.&lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;In the original movies, when Obi Wan and Yoda die, their bodies vanish into mid-air. When Ani dies, there is no vanishing, which I assumed to be caused by his being influenced by the dark side for so long.&lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;And okay... the prequels are crap and lots of stuff doesn&#039;t make sense. But when any of the Jedi died in that movie, not a single one vanished. Not even QuiGon. &lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;I wish I knew what the &quot;rule&quot; was for that.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Started thinking last night more about this entry and Star Wars and one thing that has really bugged me is this: the seeming inconsistent rule for what happens when a Jedi dies.</p>
<p>In the original movies, when Obi Wan and Yoda die, their bodies vanish into mid-air. When Ani dies, there is no vanishing, which I assumed to be caused by his being influenced by the dark side for so long.</p>
<p>And okay&#8230; the prequels are crap and lots of stuff doesn&#8217;t make sense. But when any of the Jedi died in that movie, not a single one vanished. Not even QuiGon. </p>
<p>I wish I knew what the &#8220;rule&#8221; was for that.</p>
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		<title>By: Diana Peterfreund</title>
		<link>http://www.dianapeterfreund.com/worldbuilding-post-one/comment-page-1/#comment-5541</link>
		<dc:creator>Diana Peterfreund</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 27 Sep 2006 22:56:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great link, Heather! I love Holly Lisle&#039;s writing articles.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great link, Heather! I love Holly Lisle&#8217;s writing articles.</p>
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		<title>By: Heather Harper</title>
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		<dc:creator>Heather Harper</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 27 Sep 2006 19:43:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is an article by Holly Lisle on rules for better fantasy.  &lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;If anyone is interested. :) &lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;http://hollylisle.com/fm/Articles/rules-for-better-fantasy.html</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is an article by Holly Lisle on rules for better fantasy.  </p>
<p>If anyone is interested. <img src='http://www.dianapeterfreund.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  </p>
<p><a href="http://hollylisle.com/fm/Articles/rules-for-better-fantasy.html" rel="nofollow">http://hollylisle.com/fm/Articles/rules-for-better-fantasy.html</a></p>
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		<title>By: Paula</title>
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		<dc:creator>Paula</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 27 Sep 2006 19:40:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Diana, this post hit home for me.  Worldbuilding, well good worldbuilding, is what makes a reader want to keep reading.  IMO.&lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;I&#039;m reading a book right now that has me wanting to pull my hair out.  In some scenes the MC is this simple, info-seeking innocent and then in the very next she&#039;s spouting philosophy and dropping knowledge of someone much worldlier.  If I had a dime for everytime I&#039;ve looked up from the text and uttered, &quot;Huh?!&quot; I&#039;d be rich!&lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;When there are no rules it only frustrates the reader!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Diana, this post hit home for me.  Worldbuilding, well good worldbuilding, is what makes a reader want to keep reading.  IMO.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m reading a book right now that has me wanting to pull my hair out.  In some scenes the MC is this simple, info-seeking innocent and then in the very next she&#8217;s spouting philosophy and dropping knowledge of someone much worldlier.  If I had a dime for everytime I&#8217;ve looked up from the text and uttered, &#8220;Huh?!&#8221; I&#8217;d be rich!</p>
<p>When there are no rules it only frustrates the reader!</p>
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		<title>By: Carrie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Carrie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 27 Sep 2006 18:49:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A long while back I fell into the same hole that I tend to get sucked into every now and again.  The pit of &quot;what&#039;s selling now and how can I join in?!&quot;  Vampire YA, I thought.  So I sat down to write one.  Then my boyfriend said, &quot;why does she have to be a vampire?&quot;  and I said, &quot;because.&quot;  He said, &quot;no seriously, it has to be important that she&#039;s a vampire.&quot;  And I said, &quot;because that&#039;s what&#039;s selling right now.&quot; &lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;Excellent point, Diana, that there has to be a reason for our choices.  And &quot;because that&#039;s what is selling&quot; is rarely a good reason :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A long while back I fell into the same hole that I tend to get sucked into every now and again.  The pit of &#8220;what&#8217;s selling now and how can I join in?!&#8221;  Vampire YA, I thought.  So I sat down to write one.  Then my boyfriend said, &#8220;why does she have to be a vampire?&#8221;  and I said, &#8220;because.&#8221;  He said, &#8220;no seriously, it has to be important that she&#8217;s a vampire.&#8221;  And I said, &#8220;because that&#8217;s what&#8217;s selling right now.&#8221; </p>
<p>Excellent point, Diana, that there has to be a reason for our choices.  And &#8220;because that&#8217;s what is selling&#8221; is rarely a good reason <img src='http://www.dianapeterfreund.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Trish Ryan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Trish Ryan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 27 Sep 2006 18:26:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I never thought about it as world building before, but I like the basics you lay out: there must be rules, there are consequences, and we all need to figure out why we are who we are so we can accomplish our VERY IMPORTANT LIFE MISSION :)  &lt;br/&gt;&lt;br/&gt;(A little bit of my superhero fantasy shining through...)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I never thought about it as world building before, but I like the basics you lay out: there must be rules, there are consequences, and we all need to figure out why we are who we are so we can accomplish our VERY IMPORTANT LIFE MISSION <img src='http://www.dianapeterfreund.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />   </p>
<p>(A little bit of my superhero fantasy shining through&#8230;)</p>
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